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Realtors: A bullet-proof strategy to compete with Zillow

Read more. "Long long time ago dinosaurs roamed the earth. A comet hit and the dinosaurs  were gone . We have a new comet  approaching the Real Estate  industry. This comet is technology and if you believe that it will miss you, as the dinosaur,   your business will perish.   If you want to survive over the next decade, stay ahead of technology and your competition than... THIS BOOK IS AN EYE-OPENING MUST READ!" Rafal Dyrda, The Board of Directors Condominium Institute (ICN) 3 TRENDS Every Realtor MUST Know         to Compete with ZILLOW Are you aware that  ZILLOW  and DISCOUNT  BROKERAGES will continue to compete with you on prices? Do you realize they'll keep cutting their commission to almost nothing just to  SNEAK AWAY  a client a

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Your Characters Speak Your Language by Mary Deal

One of the most difficult accomplishments in writing is to get a certain character’s dialect and accent correct. When you include foreign characters in your story, it’s imperative that your reader know they have an accent relative to the country or locale from which they hail. Be attentive to these nuances or all your characters will sound like you. An author who is not a linguist or grammarian may have a certain limited capability at using the English language. Without expanding your knowledge or simply using a Thesaurus, you will find yourself repeating the same words and phrases over and over. Let’s take the example of a foreign accent. Your character’s manner of speech will be greatly affected by the way you describe that person and the nuances of the country of their birth. Say you’ve set up your character as being from France. Maybe he dresses in fine French clothes, is real dapper and has European table manners. Beyond that, have him use French phrases like mon cher

Author Intrusion by Mary Deal

Author intrusion is something I saw a bit of in new writers’ manuscripts when I did a lot of editing. A story is usually told through the mind of one or more characters. It’s known as the story’s point of view (POV). (Also see the article Choosing a Point of View above in The Parts ) The reader is only allowed to know what the point of view character perceives and experiences internally. Here’s a correct sentence written through a character’s mind, told in 3rd Person POV: ~ Sara watched with nerves on edge, unsure of what she was seeing. Now told using author intrusion: ~ If we look at Sara, we see that she is hesitant about getting involved. In the 3rd Person POV, we are in Sara’s mind experiencing hesitation with her. In the author intrusion example, the author stopped the story to speak directly to the reader, telling the reader what Sara experiences, instead of letting the reader be Sara. In the past, many stories were told in this manner. The au

Hotter and better than 50 Shades - compares with Eat, Pray, Love

Read more. http://clicks.aweber.com/y/ct/?l=K9JzQ&m=3lkQBd.20.iD2si&b=nnyBz8zbdkiYY1whj5KtCg Bozena Kloda-Urbanski: "Absolutely enthralling! It's one of those books that as soon you start reading you can't put away until you are done! I loved how realistically the characters were painted through their language and emotions. The tone is conversational, it immediately draws you in into the plot. The story is one of those too familiar these days in many marriages, until the twist, which takes it to a completely new level! And that's when you really get 'sucked in' until you read the very last word. I can see this book easily turned into a suspenseful movie!" Dr. Alexandra Rose has everything a woman could want. She̢۪s the wife of a renowned cardiologist, the mother of three adorable sons, and a successful chiropractor. But on their twentieth anniversary, her husband shocks her with his affair. Her life spins out of control, and she faces the other si

A Whale of a Tale

Read more. An unexpected encounter leads a girl to follow her instincts; taking her on an astonishing journey into uncharted territory full of turbulence, grace and spirit. Rich in vivid images Severson captures the private lives of the Maui resident's we visitors rarely meet. An inspiring story for anyone who doubts themselves when following their dream. ~Judi Pine Sellers, Management Consultant: Hawaii, in the mid-twentieth century, where the turquoise ocean, emerald green landscape and miles of sandy beaches lure you into a native woman's world. Lissa's unexpected meeting with a baby humpback whale begins a tale of unlikely friendship, commitment, and love, shining through years of life on an ever-growing island paradise. Lurking in the prosperity of growth, however, is danger, drama, and threats to the animal population. Lissa must deal with all of it in her quiet quest to take care of her whale friend, Henri. This novel will transport you to the lush warm island of Mau